Constructive Criticism Please...?

LOL it's actually pretty good & SUPER sweet. You have talent! My only suggestion would be to edit it for grammar and such, because spell check won't get everything for you. And, also, since this is the beginning, you should play around. Maybe write the Jake-Lindsay conversation and head in a new direction. What if they teased each other a lot? What if they were a bit awkward? Or maybe change the way you write, or change the first paragraph of the story. A famous author once said that the first 100-1000 words you write are the worst. My suggestion is that you get through those words as fast as possible and keep trucking. Remember, this is YOUR novel. Anything can happen. Jake could be the one that pushed Maria in front of the truck. Hell, Jake could be a ZOMBIE! As long as you have the WHY behind the actions, it's all cool.

WoW - what class and talent is best for DPS PvE?

Any WoW experts who can tell me what class and talent i should go for if i want to be taking part in PvE combat (raids etc) at 85? Thanks :)

Fantasy Baseball Trade! Really need some help on this one. The trade is Cain and Zimmerman for McGehee and?

Decline the trade, Zimmerman and Cain are too good. Fielder and McGehee are nice players, but LaRoache should do just fine at 1st.

Has anyone noticed Nadal not only picks his wedgie all the time, but touches his nose right afterward?

"wedgie-picking" i might understand, everyone can get that. But, when it becomes a habit, it can get quite annoying !! However, what's worse probably, is that precisely after every single time he does that (pick his butt that is), he touches his nose!.. has anyone else noticed? Now, that's disgusting indeed !!

Fantasy baseball trade help?

Wow! you actually have a stacked team man and honestly I don't think you should like look at your team how much will Ubaldo actually do man,I think your juts looking at the name Pineda has been money and Lind is hot as anything I wouldn't do it

Do You Think It's Possible for a Woman to be reimbursed for her abortion through an HRA?

It's possible. But she's going to HAVE to ask the employer for a list of eligible items for reimbursement. See, with an HRA, the EMPLOYER gets to choose which things are reimbursable - so if they didn't include abortion on the list, it won't be reimbursable.

So we've come to a point where this is okay?

It's a common double standard, women are allowed to hit men but men are often criticized if they hit women. And men are often portrayed as dummies and comedy idiots by the media, how unfortunate! Domestic violence against men is never taken seriously. This all sums up the idea why I don't believe in feminazi equality TRASH.